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Charlotte Henley Babb's avatar

Aria plays everyone with a poker face and a disarming ... personality.

Apis Dea's avatar

Great job creating memorable sentences. Holy cannoli! I can't wait until next week's episode.

K.G. McAbee's avatar

'The only thing I’m sure of is that the ‘d’ is silent in Fragonard. Just like the truth in a forged signature.' Brilliant!

Melvin Tooker's avatar

Thanks! It's been a buildup, and I hope the payoff will be worth waiting for. Meanwhile, I've had two weeks to come up with something better for Matt to say other than this: Holy cannoli! We shot up like champagne pressure, and the elevator opened directly into the penthouse. I cringe every time I read that. I did not want to drop swear words. Hmm, maybe shot up like a bullet? But I'm working on Chapter 15 now.

Matt interrupts: Hey, I didn’t name the cannoli—I just rode the elevator. You want bullets? I’ve got plenty. But sometimes a pastry’s the only thing that doesn’t leave a mark.